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Nightmare Machine - Part 4

Title: Nightmare Machine
Author: jaune_chat
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Spoilers: Up through Season 5
Characters/Pairing(s): Aaron Hotchner, David Rossi, Emily Prentiss, Derek Morgan, Dr. Spencer Reid, Jennifer “J.J.” Jareau, Erin Strauss, Penelope Garcia, Cobb, Arthur, Eames, Ariadne, Yusef, Saito
Rating: R
Warning: Violence, aftermath of torture
Word Count: 24,948
Notes: This was written for the crossbigbang. Much thanks to bellonablack and brighteyed_jill for betaing and sucksucksmile for art!
Disclaimer: I don't own Criminal Minds or its characters and I don't make a dime off them. Nor Inception. I own nothing!
Summary: When the BAU learns than someone is using a PASIV as a weapon, they are forced to look for unconventional methods to interrogate the comatose victims of the crime. Dominic Cobb is asked to bring his team of extractors to teach the profilers the ins and outs of their trade, for when a mind is the scene of the crime, both extractors and profilers will have to depend on each other to find and stop the criminal responsible…

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nevcolleil
Oct. 10th, 2011 07:28 pm (UTC)
This is wonderful :) Even better than I had hoped! You work in a nice amount of outside perspective on each character, treat each character respectfully, and give all the main characters a fair amount of "screen time" which must have been challenging with such a large "cast" :) The action and drama are amazing and neither lacking nor overdone. I hope you write a sequel one day. I love that this ends with the possibility of future interaction between the teams made known through Saito's call and Arthur's burn phone :)
jaune_chat
Oct. 11th, 2011 09:55 am (UTC)
I'm so very glad you liked it! My very first fanfic I ever wrote had a six-person cast (first person narrator, but six person cast) that expanded to twelve before the end of the story. And I hated the idea of snubbing any of these characters, because each had something unique and awesome to add to this story. A sequel? Hmm, hadn't thought about that, but I'll keep it in mind! :)
eeka_specks
Oct. 17th, 2011 09:17 pm (UTC)
This was absolutely AMAZING! Your characterizations and your comprehension of both worlds is incredible!!! This blew me away.
jaune_chat
Oct. 18th, 2011 01:32 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you liked it! And found it! :D
quainteccentric
Oct. 19th, 2011 06:12 am (UTC)
My insides are still jittery. I can't believe the sheer brilliance you poured into this. Bravo, simply bravo!
jaune_chat
Oct. 19th, 2011 08:57 am (UTC)
This comment totally made my morning! I'm so glad you liked it!
quainteccentric
Oct. 20th, 2011 11:46 am (UTC)
I'm glad I was of assistance :)
hiddencait
Mar. 1st, 2012 04:10 am (UTC)
Oh man so very well done! I loved that this had the Inception team teaching the BAU team - it made it very natural for me who hasn't seen Inception to learn as my Criminal Minds darlings did.

Man just so seamlessly done - I can totally see this as a functioning full world. Often some crossovers can be jarring, but this just felt so complete!
jaune_chat
Mar. 1st, 2012 10:49 am (UTC)
I'm very glad this worked for you and the Inception-ness got in there naturally. Thank you so much for reading! :)
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